I welcome feedback, comments, criticism, questions and requests! I know the pacing is a little slow, but the scripting...
I welcome feedback, comments, criticism, questions and requests! I know the pacing is a little slow, but the scripting actually takes longer than the writing. This is strange for me since my other comic, Sandwich World, was scripted pretty much as I drew it (which is why there are many instances where the dialogue makes me cringe).
The six-panel format is to sort of simulate the camera's POV, which is somewhat limiting but, later on, will allow for some interesting shots. It also occurs to me that an update need not be limited to six panels, but however many I need to get each point across.
Anyway, enjoy!
